8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其——青夏教育精英家教网——

8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Amy，
I'm excited that you will come to visit China during the winter vacations．I'm writing to know that whether you can buy something for me．
Now，I'm wondering whether you can buy a kindle，e-book reader，for me，for the screen of my old kindle was broken because of the tore cover．It is produced by Amazon．I preferred a white one．Besides，the screen measure 19cm at 13.5cm will be better．By the way，my budget is about 1000yuan．Please help me to buy it if it is convenience for you．I will high appreciate your kindness．
I'm looking forward to your coming soon．
Yours，
Li Hua．

7．The town provides a wide choice ofentertainment（娱乐）．

6．The Olympic torch （火炬）is considered as thesymbol（象征，符号）of peace and friendship．

5．More and more people have becomeconcerned（关心的）about the environment．

4．My uncle is one of the mostinfluential（有影响的）figures in the government．

3．My brother is majoring inengineering（（土木）工程）because he is interested in designing and building roads，bridges，etc．

2．You are always looking for your keys．Remember to leave things you can find them next time．（　　）

1．It is fortunate that Jim escaped death whenafire broke out in his home on Sunday morning．（　　）

20．If it rains，the sports meet the day after tomorrow will have to be put off．（　　）

19．The young mother tells everyone that she has a clever boy she is proud．（　　）

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