15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面——青夏教育精英家教网——

15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
A college graduate was new in the job and she found something really strange．One of her colleague was a lazy man，who usually played his digital camera or listen to music during working time．To her surprised，the boss never blamed him because his behavior．
One day，her colleague was listening to the music while the boss came and said serious，"the host computer has something wrong．"The colleague rushed to the controlling center to solving the problem and began to fix them silently．Twenty minutes later，and the host computer reworked normally．Then the graduate realized the economic loss what her colleague had saved this time must have been hundreds of his salary．

14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
All of us know the old saying"Practice make perfect"．It tells us unless we want to realize our aim，we should practise and one day we will make it．It's easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming．At first I found difficult to control my body．I just sink into the water．I felt very frightening．Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed．I went to the swimming pool every day，learned from them and practised．A day，when my friend pushed me into the swimming pool，I sudden found that I could swim．How excited I was!Now I can swim much more better than before．

13．As is known to all，the number of students in senior high school is increasing．

12．The prize will go to the writerwhose story shows the most imagination．

11．My neighbor used to give me a hand in time of trouble，which was very kind of them．

10．A terrible earthquake happened in China in 2008，causing thousands of deaths．（cause）

9．We'll have to work two more hours a dayto complete the project as planned．（complete）

8．Thepolluted water causes diseases and death．（pollute）

7．In the last few years，thousands of filmshave been produced all over the world．（produce）

6．Hehad hardly returned （hardly return） when he bought a house．

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