8．Hefiercely criticized self-styled educational experts for ignoring Shakespeare．——青夏教育精英家教网——

8．Hefiercely （猛烈地，激烈地） criticized self-styled educational experts for ignoring Shakespeare．

7．In Northern California，a wildfire hasspread（传播，蔓延） a haze of smoke over 200 miles．

6．Marriages in proximity of blood areforbidden（禁止）by the law．

5．The journey to India in 1986left an incredibleimpression（印象）on me．

4．The result willdefinitely（确定地） turn out to be just the opposite of their wish．

3．They talked about the contradictory theories of theorigin（起源） of life．

2．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
As is well-known that birds are our friends．But the large number of birds have been killed for food．The other day I was walking in the woods while a shot was heard．Hearing the shot，the bird in the trees flew to all directions．A bird was badly injured and looked sadly．Finding the bird injured，so I decided to take it home．At home I take good care of it．When it recovered，I returned itself to the woods．I hope something should be done to prevent birds from killed．

1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I'm Tim，the exchange student from China．I had been studying in your school for a year．I am deep moved by the kindness of people around．What I want to say first is that the teachers here are very friendly．They do what they can help me and encourage me to study hard．Whenever I ask for questions，they give satisfactory answers．However，my classmates offer me a lot of help，too．We get on well with each other and I have made quite a few good friend．At home，Walter's parents take good care of me，treating me as if I am their own child．
I'm so grateful for all these people，with whom help I have been used to American culture and gained a lot of knowledge．

20．Thanks for your letter．You are describing a common problem experiencing by students all over China．What you already know，the competition to get into a good university or college is very fierce，and that by turn means a heavy study load for students．I know that this can feel like terrible burden at times，but my advices to you is to keep on studying as your hard work will pay for in the end．
In the meanwhile，do you best to relax．Proper rest and relaxation are extreme important．Although I know that you are very busy，but yet I want you to try to set some time aside after class and at the weekends such that you can unwind properly．

19．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
In Wednesday morning，Tom was walking along the street while suddenly he heard two shots，they came from the bank．He ran to the bank and saw a man coming out of．The man was short and fat with red hair．He had a bag of money or a gun in his hands．The man ran away and was disappeared behind a bus．That afternoon Tom went a film．He saw the thief again and phone the police．They caught the thief．What an excited day for Tom!The bank gave him $1000forareward．

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