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9．假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你按照以下要点给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率．
1．快乐学习   2．课外活动    3．多交流
注意：1．词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好（不记入总词数），但不得抄入答题卡内．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear William，
Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed about study．I have a good mind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively．
First of all，learn in a relaxing way．This will remove our pressure，making study an easy job．Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports．Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind，making us memorize things faster and longer．（高分句型二）Music，too，is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better．
Last but not least，we should exchange ideas with our classmates．Through the communication we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study．（高分句型三）
I hope these can benefit you．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率．内容要点：1．快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；2．积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；3．多与同学交流，互相鼓励．
写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩．注意：1．词数100左右，开头和结尾已经为你写好；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【亮点说明】Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed about study．句中使用宾语从句；
Here is some advice on how to study effectively．疑问词加动词不定式在句中作介词宾语；
Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind，making us memorize things faster and longer．Not only---，but also---引导部分倒装，句中并且运用了现在分词作结果状语；
Through the communication we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study．非限制性定语从句出现在句中．

解答 Dear William，
     Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed about study．Here is some advice on how to study effectively．（高分句型一）
     First of all，learn in a relaxing way．This will remove our pressure，making study an easy job．Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports．Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind，making us memorize things faster and longer．（高分句型二）Music，too，is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better．
     Last but not least，we should exchange ideas with our classmates．Through the communication we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study．（高分句型三）
     I hope these can benefit you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．