题目内容
【题目】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim得知你要参加CCTV《朗读者》节目的录制,来信询问相关情况。请你给Jim回信。内容包括:
1.你朗读的内容;2.你选择上述内容的原因;
3.上述内容对你的影响。
注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
How is it going? Thank you for your support on my upcoming attendance in the CCTV program The Reader.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is it going? Thank you for your support on my upcoming attendance in the CCTV program The Reader.
The book I have chosen is “Fu Lei’s Family Letters” in which he shared his view about art and life in order to guide his son. There are two reasons why I’ve decided to read one of his letters to the audience nationwide. Firstly, you can feel the profound fatherly love and his efforts to guide the next generation, which I believe will touch the youngsters like me. Besides, many traditional virtues, such as integrity, can be found in his works, which can inspire students like us.
The book has an immense influence on me. Actually, it is this book that changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son. Besides, the wisdom in the book helps me shape a positive attitude towards life and future. Thus, it came to my mind the moment I got the invitation.
That’s all about it. I hope my introduction can be of some help. Is there any book that also plays an important role in your life? I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:1. 通篇以一般现在时为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。3. 注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述,一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够,内容不够丰满。
【范文亮点】
文章采用了“How is it going最近过的怎么样”“Thank you for your support on…感谢你对于…的支持”“shared his view about分享关于…的观点”“There are two reasons why 有两个原因…”“plays an important role in 在…发挥重要作用”等高分句式。
文章采用了“in order to为了”,“Firstly、Besides等连接词,使行文更加流畅”,“ profound fatherly love深厚的父爱”“traditional virtues传统美德”“shape( a positive attitude)塑造…”等高频词组。