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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm very much glad to hear that your international shopping center will build non-smoking supermarket. In my opinion, it is a good idea to do so, for it can not only help the smokers to smoke less, and it can also do good to other customers' health. Since you had given up selling cigarettes, the customers who doesn't like smoking are sure to support you. In addition, smoke in the shopping center may cause fire, which is very dangerous to both your possession and the safety of the customers. In a word, the non-smoking supermarket will not effect your business. To the contrary, it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health.
Best wishes!

Answer 1

【答案】①去掉much；②non-smoking前加a；③and改为bu；t④had 改为 have；⑤doesn't 改为don't；⑥smoke改为 smoking；⑦possession 改为 possessions；⑧effect 改为 affect；⑨To 改为 On；⑩health 改为healthy。

【解析】本文是一篇议论文，作者讲述了吸烟的坏处及对Mr. Smith建无烟超市的赞成。

①.考查副词。此处副词very修饰形容词glad，much属多余。故去掉much。

②考查冠词。supermarket是可数名词单数，表示数量“一个”需要加冠词，故non-smoking前加a。

③考查连词。句意：因为它不仅能帮助吸烟者吸的更少，而且对其他顾客的健康也好。not only…but also…固定结构“不但…而且…”，故and 改为but。

④考查时态。根据句中are sure to...可知，应用现在时态，根据后面的given判断用现在完成时，故had改为have。

⑤考查主谓一致。先行词是the customers是复数，定语从句的动词与之一致，用复数，故doesn't改为don't。

⑥考查动名词。此处smoke作句子的主语，应用其动名词形式。故smoke改为smoking。

⑦考查名词。possession表示“财产，所有物”时，多用复数形式。表示“拥有，持有”时为不可数名词。此处指财产，故possession改为possessions。

⑧考查形近词。effect是名词,而此处用于will后需要动词affect作谓语，故effect改为affect。

⑨考查短语。on the contrary是固定短语，表示“正相反”，故To改为On。

⑩ 考查形容词。keep加形容词作表语，意为“使……处于某种状态”，此处指保持健康，故health改为healthy。