题目内容
5.假定你是李华,你的加拿大笔友Mike对你校上周刚举办完的运动会很感兴趣.请你用英文给他写封信,介绍运动会的有关情况.内容应包括:
1.运动会的基本情况(时间、地点和项目);
2.你自己参加的项目;
3.你对此次运动会的看法.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Mike,
I learn from your letter that you show interest in our last school sports meet.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 这是一篇提纲类作文,首先要审题,确定话题:介绍运动会的有关情况.时态用一般过去时.人称用第一人称.
写作内容:
1.运动会的基本情况(时间、地点和项目);
2.你自己参加的项目;
3.你对此次运动会的看法.
写作注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数.
重点词汇与短语:
1.show interest in 对…有兴趣
2.would like to 愿意
3.took place 发生
4.participated in 参加
5.was proud of 自豪
高分句型:
1.The sports meet took place on our school playground,lasting 3 days in all.
分词短语lasting 3 days in all作状语,因为last与主句的主语The sports是主动的关系,故用现在分词.
现在分词做状语与过去分词做状语的最主要区别在于两者与所修饰的主语的主动与被动关系的区别.
现在分词作状语时,现在分词的动作就是句子主语的动作,它们之间的关系是主动关系.
He went out shutting the door behind him.
他出去后将门随手关上.
Not knowing what to do,he went to his parents for help.
由于不知如何办是好,他去找父母帮忙.
句意:这个运动在操场上进行,总的持续3天.
2.As I wanted to challenge myself,I participated in the 3000-meter race.
as引导原因状语从句,意思为因为.as是从属连词,说明一般的因果关系,语气比because弱,说明比较明显的原因,它引导的从句通常放在句首,有时也可放在句末.
例如:As it is raining,you\'d better take a taxi.天下雨了,你最好乘出租车.
3.As for me,the sports meet not only offered us students a good chance to relax ourselves,but also taught us the importance of teamwork and the courage of facing challenges.
not only…but also意思是不仅…而且,引导并列句子.如:
She likes not only music but also sport.她不但喜欢音乐而且喜欢运动.
The place was not only cold,but also damp.那个地方不但很冷而且很潮湿.
解答 Dear Mike,
I learn from your letter that you show interest in our last school sports meet.So I would like to share something of it with you.The sports meet took place on our school playground,lasting 3 days in all.(高分句型)(运动会的基本情况) We enjoyed different events like relay races and some fun Games.As I wanted to challenge myself,I participated in the 3000-meter race.(高分句型)I fought hard for the whole race with my classmates cheering me.I finished last,but I was still proud of myself.(介绍自己参加的项目)
As for me,the sports meet not only offered us students a good chance to relax ourselves,but also taught us the importance of teamwork and the courage of facing challenges.(高分句型)(对此次运动会的看法)
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 这是一篇所给材料比较详细的提纲类作文,我们要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来,动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,同时要表达出自己的观点,可适当的发挥,在写作时要注意时态,人称,固定词组搭配,要注意语言的规范性,做到上下文联系紧密,条理清楚,符合逻辑关系.
A. | to follow | B. | following | C. | followed | D. | being followed |
-_______?He has been preparing for it for days.( )
A. | Why not | B. | What if | C. | So what | D. | How come |
A. | so that | B. | only if | C. | as though | D. | in case |