题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,最近你从校报上看到一则广告,你校外教John暑期打算开一西餐馆,需要招聘5名擅长英语的暑期兼职工,请你根据下列要点提示写一封求职信。
1. 李华,男,17岁,身体健康。
2. 擅长英语,口语流利。
3. 性格外向,交际能力强。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.书信格式已经给出,不计入总词数。
3.可以适当拓展。
Dear John,
I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job. My name is Li Hua and I am a 17-year old boy. I think I will be fit for the job. My advantages are as follows:
Firstly, I am healthy and strong. I can work for long hours in summer. Secondly, my English is excellent. I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. Finally, I am outgoing and good at communicating with others. As a result, I am popular among my classmates and teachers.
I would appreciate it if I'm offered the chance. And I'm sure I can be of great help for you.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:试题为应用文中的书信写作,是一封求职信。试题只给出写作框架,并未给出所有的具体写作细节,为半开放性写作。写好此文,需注意三点:一是写信格式要准确,信的开头已经给出,但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当,本文应重点写的是1. 李华,男,17岁,身体健康。2. 擅长英语,口语流利。3. 性格外向,交际能力强。。三要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇求职信,格式正确,采用三段式,内容齐全,语言精练,文章布局合理,同时句中使用高级句子。I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job.句中使用动词不定式的完成式;I would appreciate it if I'm offered the chance.固定句式运用巧妙;另外句中出现了一些高级词汇和短语as follows,Firstly, have no difficulty communicating with,be of great help等,它们为文章增色添彩。