Question

17．The Internet is playing a important part in our daily life．On the net，we could learn about news both home and abroad and some other informations as well．We can also make phone calls，send messages by e-mails，go to net schools，and learn foreign languages by ourselves．Beside，we can enjoy music，watch sports matches，and play the chess or cards．The net even help us do shopping，make a chat with others and make friends with them．In a word，the Internet has made our life more easier．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述因特网在我的生活起着很重要的作用．比如，可以打电话，发送信息，学外语，网上购物等．总之，因特网使我们的生活更容易．

解答 The Internet is playing a important part in our daily life．On the net，we could learn about news both∧home and abroad and some other informations as well．We can also make phone calls，send messages by e-mails，go to net schools，and learn foreign languages by ourselves．Beside，we can enjoy music，watch sports matches，and play the chess or cards．The net even help us do shopping，make a chat with others and make friends with them．In a word，the Internet has made our life more easier．
详解：
1．a改为an 考查冠词．后面的形容词important是以元音发音开始的，用不定冠词an．
2．could改为can 考查动词时态．本文的基本时态是一般现在时．
3．home前加at 考查固定搭配．at home and abroad意为"在国内外"，是固定搭配．
4．informatoins改为information 考查名词．名词information是一个不可数名词，没有复数形式．
5．e-mails改为e-mail 考查名词．介词by后面要接单数名词，不是借助某种方法或者手段．
6．Beside改为Besides 考查副词．介词beside意为"在…旁边"；副词besides意为"而且"，表示递进关系．
7．去掉the 考查冠词．表示棋类的名词前面不需要使用冠词，要单独使用play chess．
8．help改为helps 考查主谓一致．主语the net是单数形式，故谓语动词也要使用第三人称单数的形式．
9．make改为have 考查词语用法．have a chat with sb．意为"与某人交谈"，是固定搭配．
10．more改为much 考查副词．用副词much修饰比较级，more本身就是比较级的形式．

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