Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter发邮件向你询问中国的植树节（Tree Planting Day）的相关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1. 植树节的主要活动；

2. 人们重视植树节的原因；

3. 建议他来中国体验。

注意: 1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I'm very glad to receive your letter and give a brief introduction to Tree Planting Day in our country.

Tree Planting Day, which falls on March 12th every year, is a significant festival in China. On this day, country leaders, civil servants, company employees and even school pupils will go outdoors to plant trees. Why do people attach so much importance to the festival? For one thing, more and more people have realized the urgency of environmental protection. For another, some measures the government takes to encourage people to plant more trees play a key part.

Do you want to know more about the festival? I strongly suggest that you come to China and experience it. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件答复向你询问中国植树节相关信息的英国笔友Peter，让他了解中国植树节相关情况并邀请他来中国体验。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 植树节的主要活动；

2. 人们重视植树节的原因；

3. 建议他来中国体验。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

give a brief introduction to；fall on；attach so much importance to；environmental protection；take measures；encourage sb. to do sth.；play a key part

第三步：连词成句

1. I'm very glad to receive your letter and give a brief introduction to Tree Planting Day in our country.

2. Tree Planting Day, which falls on March 12th every year, is a significant festival in China.

3. Why do people attach so much importance to the festival?

4. more and more people have realized the urgency of environmental protection.

5. some measures the government takes to encourage people to plant more trees play a key part.

(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,

6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表选择：either…or…，or

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改