题目内容
【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
毕业在即,你班将举行一次慈善义卖会活动,目的为云南贫困地区地拉那小学(The Primary School of Dilana Yunnan Province)的阅读室更新最新书籍。班委号召全班同学出谋划策为本次慈善义卖活动设计方案,方案中必须包含以下内容:
1.确立本次活动的主题,意义;
2.描述你所设计义卖活动的方案及步骤;
3.谈谈义卖活动设计的理由。
请你把设计好的方案以书信形式寄交给班长。文章开头以为你写好且不计入本文总词数。
Dear Monitor,
I have read the suggestion of designing a charity activity for the pupils of the Primary School of Dilana Yunnan Province to provide their reading room with the latest edition books. I think the activity is meaningful. Now I have finished designing my plan and thank you for taking time to read my following plan.
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Yours sincerely
Jack
【答案】As for me, I decide to choose “reach out your hands, donate a penny, support children’s reading dream” as the theme of this charity sale. Although our national economy has been greatly improved, children in poor and remote areas still lack books. Through this activity we can not only help the children who like reading but short of extensive resources, but also remind the students like us to cherish the learning opportunities.
As planned, the charity sale will be held next Friday from 1:00pm to 2:30pm on our playground, when most of the students and teachers are free, so they may come to have a look. Each of us is supposed to bring at least 5 items, which are suitable for and appeal to senior students. Besides, each of the items must be attached to reasonable price. This week, we should prepare some posters, by which we can attract the attention of teachers and students. Additionally, in order not to mess up the activity, we should choose some salesmen, cashiers, accountants, and market regulators. During the sale, everyone should play his/her part to ensure safety, and make sure we can sell as many items as possible. After the charity, the cashier will calculate the total income and present it to the headteacher.
I think we can raise some money for the school, and meanwhile we can have a meaningful time as well.
【解析】
本篇要求考生写一封信,给班委介绍自己的义卖活动方案。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分
要求:1. 确立本次活动的主题,意义;
2.简述所设计义卖活动的方案及步骤;
3.谈谈义卖活动设计的理由。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
theme /charity sale/ have a lack of/ remind sb of sth/ be short of/ extensive/ have a look at/ attract one’s attention/ appeal to / be suitable for/ be supposed to do/ get prepared for/ play a part in/mess up
第三步:连词成句
For me, I decide to choose “reach out your hands, donate a penny, support children’s reading dream” as the theme of this charity sale.
Through this activity we can not only help the children but also remind the students like us to cherish the learning opportunities.
As planned, the charity sale will be held next Friday from 1:00pm to 2:30pm on our playground, when most of the students and teachers are free, so they may come to have a look.
Each of us is supposed to bring at least 5 items.
Besides, each of the items must be attached to reasonable price.
This week, we should prepare some posters.
Additionally, in order not to mess up the activity, we should choose some salesmen, cashiers, accountants, and market regulators.
During the sale, everyone should play his/her part to ensure safety, and make sure we can sell as many items as possible.
After the charity, the cashier will calculate the total income and present it to the headteacher.
10.I think we can raise some money for the school, and meanwhile we can have a meaningful time as well.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词)
1. 表文章结构顺序:first of all; to start with; firstly;in the end,;at last…
2. 表并列补充关系:what’s more,;besides; in addition; as well as;last but not the least…
3. 表因果关系:because; as; so…
第五步:修改润色 (加入从句或高级词汇)