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7.你校将组织"校园最美同学"的评选活动,要求学生推荐心目中的最美同学.你想要推荐你的同班同学Lily.请根据一下要点,完成短文.
1.简要表述Lily的优秀品质;2.用具体事例进行描述.
注意:1.词数100-120;
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称;
3.开头已给出不计入词数.
It is my classmate Lily that I intended to recommend because                  

分析 这是一篇要求考生根据所给要点完成的提纲类作文,内容包括:简要表示Lily的优秀品质;用具体的一个事例;文章在描述优秀品质时,用一般现在时,在列举事例时,用一般过去式.
高级词汇、短语和句型:
intend to do sth.打算做…
recommend…as…推荐
高分句型一:①As far as I'm concerned,Lily,recommended as"the most beautiful student",sets a good example to all the students with such virtues as selflessness,bravery,honesty and so on.
as far as i'm concerned 就我所知
set a good example to sb.给…树立好的榜样
高分句型二:②Realizing what had happened,Lily  jumped into the pond without hesitation.
Realizing…现在分词做状语;
without hesitation 毫不犹豫

解答 It is my classmate Lily that I intended to recommed because she is"the most beautiful student"in my mind.①As far as I'm concerned,Lily,recommended as"the most beautiful student",sets a good example to all the students with such virtues as selflessness,bravery,honesty and so on.
 Last Sunday,Lily,together with other students,went to the park for a picnic.All of a sudden,there came a loud cry,"Help!Help!"It was a little girl who fell into the pond in the park.②Realizing what had happened,Lily  jumped into the pond without hesitation.Finally,the little girl was saved.
Therefore,I strongly recommend Lily  as"the most beautiful student".

点评 本题时一篇提纲类的作文,考生在作答时一定要注意审题,包括所有要点,尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式,注意句子之间的连贯性.

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