题目内容
16．假定你是李华，你的高中生活即将结束，请写一封e-mail给你在美国的笔友Peter，向他介绍这个暑假你的计划．注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
How is it going？The end of my Senior 3 marks the start of my coming summer holiday，which will last from July 1st to August 31st．（高分句型一） I have a burning desire to make the most of it．
To relieve my worn-out body and soul，first I'm going to enjoy a relaxing exotic journey to Bali Island for a week．（高分句型二）After that，with regular exercise included，I will bury myself into everyday study for good preparation for my future study．
Determined and confident，I firmly believe that I'm to make consistent progress in the new semester．（高分句型三）Through my efforts to overcome various obstacles，I really hope that I could succeed in my prominent CET next year and be admitted to a dream university．Just as the saying goes，"Where there is a will，there is a way．"
Looking forward to your earliest reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，你的高中生活即将结束，请写一封e-mail给你在美国的笔友Peter，向他介绍这个暑假你的计划．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：make the most of充分利用；make consistent progress取得不断的进步；Just as the saying goes俗话说；
The end of my Senior 3 marks the start of my coming summer holiday，which will last from July 1stto August 31st．（高分句型一）
To relieve my worn-out body and soul，first I'm going to enjoy a relaxing exotic journey to Bali Island for a week．（高分句型二）
Determined and confident，I firmly believe that I'm to make consistent progress in the new semester．（高分句型三）
解答 Dear Peter，
How is it going？The end of my Senior 3 marks the start of my coming summer holiday，which will last from July 1st to August 31st．（高分句型一） I have a burning desire to make the most of it．
To relieve my worn-out body and soul，first I'm going to enjoy a relaxing exotic journey to Bali Island for a week．（高分句型二）After that，with regular exercise included，I will bury myself into everyday study for good preparation for my future study．
Determined and confident，I firmly believe that I'm to make consistent progress in the new semester．（高分句型三）Through my efforts to overcome various obstacles，I really hope that I could succeed in my prominent CET next year and be admitted to a dream university．Just as the saying goes，"Where there is a will，there is a way．"
Looking forward to your earliest reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
