Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
注意：修改10处，在横线上写出错误指出，并加以修改。

My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

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Answer 1

【答案】buy；buying；here；there；long；a long；but；and；on；in；was；were；luggages；luggage；friend；friend’s；lent to me；lent me；feel；felt
【解析】1I和buy为主动关系，用现在分词表主动。
2因为现在不在杭州，因此使用there。
3holiday为可数名词，单数前面要用冠词。
4bought和turned为并列关系。
5pocket常和in搭配。
6clothes后跟连系动词常用复数。
7luggage为不可数名词，应该使用单数。
8根据arrived at可知是到朋友家，因此用ftiend’s来表示。
9lend为及物动词，后直接加宾语。
10全文表示过去的时态，因此使用一般过去时。