[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with them.

【答案】

【1】how→what

【2】在secrets之后加with

【3】talks→talk

【4】在always之后加a

【5】hear→hearing

【6】is→are

【7】happily→happy

【8】去掉to

【9】advices→advice

【10】spent→ spend

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲的是“一个朋友应该是什么样子”。

【1】how→what 由what引导宾语从句，从句中like缺宾语，缺少引导词，故把how改为what。

【2】在secrets之后加with 固定词组：share sth. with sb.，故在secrets之后加with。

【3】talks→talk will后须加动词原形，故把talks改为talk。

【4】在always之后加a listener是可数名词，且是泛指，故在always之后加a。

【5】hear→hearing after是介词，后接名词或动词-ing形式，故把hear改为hearing。

【6】is→ are that代指先行词words，所以谓语动词要用复数。故把is改为are。

【7】happily→happy 形容词作宾语补足语。故把happily改为happy。

【8】去掉to which you need作定语，意为：提供你所需的帮助。故去掉to。

【9】advices→advice advice是不可数名词。故把advices改为advice。

【10】spent→ spend 前后时态须一致，前面用一般现在时，此处也要用一般现在时态，故把spent改为spend。

【学法指导】

短文改错口诀：动词形，名词数; 注意形和副; 非谓动词细辨别; 习惯用法要记住; 句子成分多分析; 逻辑错误须关注。

一. 动词形：主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。例如：

My favorite sport are football. (is)；Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. (are)

上述两例分别属于时态错误和主、谓不一致错误。找出此类错误的关键是树立牢固的时态概念，注意短文内容发生或存在的时间，保持时间概念的一致性。10.【10】spent→ spend 前后时态须一致。可知此处用一般现在时态，故把spent→ spend。

二. 名词数：指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。

例如：…so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. (subjects) 9.【9】advices→advice advice是不可数名词。故把advices→advice。

三. 区分形和副：即区分形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错的常考点。

例如 I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (wonderful)；Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family. (Unfortunately)需要注意的是，形容词多用来做定、表、补语等，而副词只能在句子中作状语，修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子。第一例中的wonderful作定语修饰time，第二句的Unfortunately作状语修饰整个句子。7.【7】happily→ happy 形容词作宾语补足语。故把happily→ happy。

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