Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Mary has been award the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. In the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Mary went downtown and walked from one store to another, looked for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure times in comfortable classrooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching for and selecting. Finally, she finds the right clothes. Deep moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won first prize in the contest. Mary is warm-hearted so cares about the class. She deserves the honor and we should learn from him.

Answer 1

【答案】1.award→awarded

2.In→On

3.looked→looking

4.times→time

5.去掉searching后的for

6.finds→found

7.Deep→Deeply

8.first前加the

9.so→and

10.him改为her

【解析】这篇文章主要讲了玛丽热心肠并且关心班集体，被评为我们班级的“本周学生之星”。

考查时态。发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以award→awarded。

考查固定用法。当 morning, afternoon, evening有前位定语或后置定语限定时,就不用in而用on，所以In→On。

考查非谓语动词。look与其逻辑主语Mary之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词，looked→looking。

考查固定短语。enjoy one's leisure time享受某人的闲暇时光，是固定短语，所以times→time。

考查动词。search 指的是搜寻的范围； search for+具体的的目标，所以去掉searching后的for。

考查时态。发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以finds→found。

修饰动词moved，用副词，所以Deep→Deeply。

考查冠词。特指这次比赛中的“第一名”，所以first前加the。

考查连词。玛丽是如此热心肠并且关心班集体。表示并列关系，所以so→and。

考查代词。Mary是女的，所以him改为her。