Question

【题目】书面表达
假如你是李华，你参加了你校本周五举行的英语阅读比赛，并获得第一名。请根据以下提示用英语给你的美国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：1）描述比赛的情况；
2）希望他提供单词的记忆方法；
3）欢迎他到中国过春节。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：the Spring Festival春节
Dear Tom,
……
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】【参考范文】Dear Tom,
I'm glad to tell you that I won the first prize in the English Reading Competition held in our school this Friday. Before the competition, I was so nervous. But once I started, I tried my best to do it. When the final result came out, many classmates offered me best wishes. While reading, I met with many difficult words, so I need your advice on how to remember English words. In addition, the Spring Festival is coming, and I know you want to experience Chinese traditional culture. I'd enjoy it if you can come to China to spend the festival with us.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给美国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）描述比赛的情况；2）希望他提供单词的记忆方法；3）欢迎他到中国过春节。书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意时态的选择，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。