题目内容

10．你接受了一项写作任务，要为本校写一篇招募志愿者快讯．
【写作内容】
请根据以下信息，写一篇关于志愿服务招募的快讯．
志愿者的选拔
9月20日之前，在全校选出30名志愿者参与社区义工服务．
志愿者的条件
至少16岁；国庆节期间参与社区义工服务活动；
有耐心、有责任感；最好有过照顾老人的经历．
服务对象
社区的残疾人，老年人；
志愿活动目的
通过帮助有需要的人提升人们的社会责任感；
呼吁人们对残疾人、老年人要有更多的关心．
*社区义工服务  community volunteer service*国庆节 National Holiday
【写作要求】
只能用5个句子表达全部内容
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯．

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，介绍志愿者招募的情况，写一篇快讯．写作要点包括：1．志愿者的选拔；2．志愿者的条件；3．服务对象；4．志愿者活动的目的．写作时时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一和第三人称为主．重要短语：take part in （参加），the National Holiday （国庆节），at least（至少），be required to do （被要求做…），a sense of responsibility （责任感），attend to sb （照料某人），in need （需要），raise social responsibility （提高社会责任感），appeal to sb to do （呼吁某人做某事），care about（关心）．
【高分句型】
1．To be a proper volunteer，you need to be at least 16 years old．
这里是动词不定式作目的状语，表示"为了成为一名合适的志愿者，你需要至少达到16岁"．
2．①Since it is the disabled and the senior citizens in the community ②that are to be served，it would be much better if you have ever attended to people of this kind．
①这里是由since引导的原因状语从句，主句为it would be much better if you have ever attended to people of this kind．
②这里是由that引导的定语从句，先行词为the disabled and the senior citizens，that在定语从句中作主语．

解答 Before September 20th，we need to select thirty volunteers to take part in the community volunteer service during the National Holiday．（志愿者的选拔）To be a proper volunteer，you need to be at least 16 years old．【高分句型】Besides，you are required to have enough patience and a strong senseof responsibility． Since it is the disabled and the senior citizens in the community that are to be served，it would be much better if you have ever attended to people of this kind．【高分句型】（服务对象、志愿者的条件） By helping these people in need，not only can we raise oursocial responsibility，but also we can appeal to people to care more about them．（志愿者活动的目的）

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评分标准
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯．
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