Question

5．请根据以下内容，写一篇英文简讯，投稿到校刊英文版．
写作内容

时间：2014年2月 人物：三名外籍大学毕业生 事件：应聘到佛山政府就职 职责：给领导提供建议 搭建佛山与国外沟通的桥梁 感受：觉得大部分民众对工作理解和支持 对工作时间不习惯 效果：引起了公众关注 吸引了更多外国商人来佛山建厂 政府评价：他们的表现超过预期           将继续引进外国人才

写作要求
只能用5个句子表达全部内容．
评分标准
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯．
In February 2014，three university graduates from abroad were employed inFoshan government．They are mainly responsible for providing advice for leaders and build a bridge for communication between Foshan and foreign countries．They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work，though they are not accustomed to the working hours．Their work has drawn public attention and attracted more foreign businessmen to set up factories in Foshan．As a result of their good performance，the government officials comment that the foreign employers have gone beyond their expectations and they will continue to bring in more foreign talents．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇英文简讯．
写作要点包括：1．时间；2．人物；3．事件；4．职责；5．感受；6．效果；7．政府评价．人称以第三人称为主．
重要短语：be responsible for （对…负责），provide sth for sb （为…提供…），be accustomed to doing （习惯于…），draw public attention（吸引公众的注意），set up（建立，搭建），as a result of （由于），beyond one's expectations （超出了某人的预期），bring in （引进）．
【高分句型】
1．They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work，though they are not accustomed to the working hours．
这里是由though引导的让步状语从句，逗号之前是主句．They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work中是由that引导的宾语从句，作形容词happy的宾语．
2．Their work has drawn public attention and attracted more foreign businessmen to set up factories in Fo shan．这里是由and连接了draw和attract两个谓语动词，动词不定式to set up factories in Fo Shan作目的状语．

解答 In February 2014，（时间） three university graduates from abroad were employed in Fo Shan government．（人物、事件）They are mainly responsible for providing advice for leaders and build abridge for communication between Fo shan and foreign countries．（职责） They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work，though they are not accustomed to the working hours．【高分句型】（感受）Their work has drawn public attention and attracted more foreign businessmen to set up factories in Fo shan．【高分句型】（效果） As a result of their good performance，the government officials comment that the foreign employers have gone beyond their expectations and they will continue to bring in more foreign talents．（政府评价）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．