题目内容
【题目】“目标”在人们成长的路上发挥着重要的作用,在高三尤为重要。请你结合自身实际,按以下提示,准备一篇英语发言稿,在英语课上与同学们作交流。
1. 目标的重要性;
2. 如何设立目标;
3. 谈谈你的近期目标;
4. 如何实现你的目标。
5. 注意:
1. 词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear classmates,
It’s a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I’d like to share my thought about goals with you.
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Wish you to realize your dreams. That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】
Dear classmates,
It’s a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I’d like to share my thought about goals with you.
There is no denying that goals are important especially for seniors because they act as maps guiding you to where you are heading for. With a clear direction you will straightly get what you want.
In my view, goals are not difficult to set. First, you should make clear what you really want. What’s more, it’s essential to make detailed plans which can be carried out step by step.
My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.
To achieve this, not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared, but also I will keep an positive attitude towards ups and downs in life.
Wish you to realize your dreams. That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
试题分析: 句型和语法方面:固定句型There is no denying that goals are important especially for seniors;原因状语从句because they act as maps;非谓语动词guiding you to where you are heading for;宾语从句where you are heading for和what you want;with复合结构With a clear direction;固定句型it’s essential to make detailed plans;定语从句which can be carried out step by step;目的状语从句so that I can step into an ideal university;固定句型和倒装not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute等,范文使用了较多的语法知识,为作文增色很多;
连接词方面:范文使用In my view, Firstly, What’s more, To achieve this等短语衔接句子和段落,使作文显得有层次、有条理;
短语方面:范文使用了act as, head for, carry out, step by step, step into, spare no effort, make full use of, keep an positive attitude towards, ups and downs等,丰富了作文的内容。