题目内容
【题目】假设你是新华中学高一年级的李华,你的英国网友Tom来信邀请你暑假到伦敦观光旅游,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
1.表示歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.不要逐条翻译,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for inviting me to go to sightseeing in London during summer holidays.
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
Thank you for inviting me to go sightseeing in London during summer holidays.
It is much to my regret that I can not join you,because I will be fully occupied in preparing for New Terms' studies-Senior Two.I must do a lot of homework ,review different subjects and join in different after-class activities. What's more,my grandma is ill,so I must take care of her.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance.Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting next time? If so,please don't hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date.I do long for a happy journey with you.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:
1.本篇是一封回信。你的英国网友Tom来信邀请你暑假到伦敦观光旅游,但你因故不能赴约。你要对此表达你的感谢并给出解释
2.要点要齐全,要解释出你不能去的原因,并且另约时间。可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。
3.根据要点,先组此句;句式丰富。
4.注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述,一定要多用句型,否则会显得说服力不够,内容不够丰满。
【范文亮点】
1.文章开头用了 Thank you for ,是回复邀请函的重要格式,后面第二段紧接着解释了这样做的原因,衔接紧密。
2.文章使用了“l take care of”“ join in”等句式短语,使文章内容更加饱满
3. It is much to句式的使用:
“It is much to my regret that I can not join you,because I will be fully occupied in preparing for New Terms' studies-Senior Two.”