Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Tom is no longer the boy he used to be. Only a year before, he was overweight and a little lazy. He got tiring easily and did not like sports. It was not until he got serious ill that he realized that he should make a change. He started to exercise and begin to eat a healthier diet of more vegetables or less meat. These changes helped her lose a lot of weight. He is now a very happy boy at very good shape, and that he is always so active.

We can learn from Tom that we should careful about what we eat and make sure that we take enough exercises.

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