题目内容
【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
生活本来不容易,当你觉得容易的时候,其实……
1. 请简要描述图片。
2. 谈谈由此引发的感想。
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【答案】As the picture vividly shows, the person behind silently helps the person in front share his burden so that he can move forward more easily. Life is not easy. As the saying goes that when you feel easy, someone is actually taking on your share. So we should learn to be grateful.
This picture reminds me of our parents, who not only give us life and bring us up, but also give us encouragement and support when we run into difficulties and dilemmas. However, we always take what they do for us for granted. Not only don’t we show gratitude to them, but we often make them angry and even contradict them.
In a word, the greatest kindness in the world is the kindness of parents, which is worth cherishing with our life, appreciating with our sincere heart, and repaying with practical actions.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是开放性作文,要求结合一幅图谈谈自己的感悟。
第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求结合一幅图谈谈自己的感悟:生活本来不容易,当你觉得容易的时候,其实……,要求:1. 请简要描述图片。2. 谈谈由此引发的感想。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; burden(重担),share(分担),grateful(感激的),dilemma(困境), contradict(顶撞),cherish(珍惜),support(支持),encouragement(鼓励)及repay(回报)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。