Question

13．下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在该句下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Patience is of great importance in our daily life．Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past，but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decided to walk on feet．But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minute，I would have caught it．If I chose to take a next bus，I would have to wait for other 30 minutes．Only then do I realized my problem．Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in．now whenever I am close to lose my patience，I'll think of this experience．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要描述了作者通过自己在停车点等公共汽车，没有耐心而错过该次班车的经历，体会到了有耐心在日常生活中的重要性．

解答 Patience is of great importance in our daily life．Once I waited∧a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past，
                                                                                             for                                                 passed
but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decided to walk onfeet．But no sooner had I left when the bus 
                                                                                             foot                                       than
arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minute，I would have caught it．If I chose to take anext bus，
                                                                                                                                               the
I would have to wait for other  30 minutes．Only then do I realized my problem．Being impatient will possible
                                another                                    did                                                                 possibly
waste all the effort that we have put it in．now whenever I am close tolosemy patience，I'll think of this experience
                                                    去掉                                           losing
1：waited 和 a 之间加for 考查介词搭配． wait不及物动词，wait for sb/sth 等待…所以应在waited 和 a 之间加for．
2：past→passed 考查同音词．  past 介词，经过，过去，此处缺少谓语，故past→passed．
3：feet→foot  考查名词单复数．on foot固定词组，步行．
4：when→than  考查短语搭配．no sooner…than…固定用法，一…就…
5：a→the  考查冠词．此处next bus应是特指，所以用the．
6：other→another 考查代词． another+数字+复数名词=数字+more+复数名词，固定用法"再，又多少多少…"．
7：do→did  考查时态．本文描述的是过去的一次经历，应用一般过去时，所以用did．
8：possible→possibly  考查副词．修饰动词要用副词，
9：去掉it 考查定语从句． that引导定语从句，并在从句中作宾语，因此it多于，去掉
10：lose→losing  考查动名词． 本句中be close to 接近…to 是介词，因此用动名词losing．

点评 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．