Question

8．请仔细阅读下面一段文字．文中共有10 处语言错误，每句最多有两处．错误涉及一个单
词的删除、修改或者增加．
删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词；
…
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10 处错误，多者（从第11 处起）不计分．
The term"China one"refers the child who was born after the 1980s，when China launched the
one-child policy．Not only were they the family's only child，but they are also the family's center of attentions．Their parents and grandparents would spared no efforts in taking care of them，and would give them anything and everything，as if they are the"emperors"of their families．
As a result，most children of the"China one"generation lack in independence as they have
become so reliant （ the adjective of rely） on their families about support．Some parents even hire maid for their children when they go to college．Other unfavorable characteristics including：bad communication skills，rude，ungratefulness and self-centeredness．

Answer 1

分析 短文讲述了二十世纪八十年代以后，随着独生子女政策的出现，中国涌现了一大批独生子女，他们作为家里唯一
孩子，备受家长宠爱，就像家里的"小皇帝"，这就造成了这些独生子女缺乏独立性，与人交往能力差，不知道感恩
，以自我为中心等一些不好的性格特点．

解答 The term"China one"refers∧the child who was born after the 1980s，when China launched the
                                       to
 one-child policy．Not only were they the family's only child，but they are also the family's
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center of attentions．Their parents and grandparents would spared no efforts in taking care of them，
             attention                                                              spare
and would give them anything and everything，as if they are the"emperors"of their families．As a
                                                                                  were
result，most children of the"China one"generation lack in independence as they have become so reliant
                                                                               去掉in       
（ the adjective of rely） on their families aboutsupport．Some parents even hire∧maid for their children
                                                                  for                                                   a      
when they go to college．Other unfavorable characteristics including：bad communication skills，rude，
                                                                                      include                                           rudeness
ungratefulness and self-centeredness．
1．refer后面加to；考查介词，refer作为"谈到，指"讲时是不及物动词，后面跟介词后才可以跟宾语，refer to是固定用法．
2．were改为are；考查时态，not only…but（also）连接两个对等的成分，时态上要保持一致，根据语境，应该用一般现在时．
3．attentions改为attention；考查名词，attention作"注意"讲，抽象名词，不可数．
4．spared改为spare；考查动词，情态动词would后面要跟动词原形，所以用spare．
5．are改为were；考查时态，这是一个虚拟语气条件句，表示不是客观存在的事实，而是说话人的假设和推测，这种情况下
   要用过去时态．
6．去掉in；考查动词，lack作为"缺乏"讲是及物动词，后面可以直接跟宾语．
7．about改为for；考查介词，这里for意为"为了"表示目的，about则没有这个用法．
8．maid前面加a；考查冠词，maid（女仆）是可数名词，前面加a表示一个．
9．including改为include；考查动词，这里用动词include作characteristics（性格）的谓语，including是介词．
10．rude改为rudeness；考查名词，这里名词和前面的skills，后面的ungratefulness等并列作句子的宾语．

点评 短文改错首先要整体理解短文，把握短文的中心思想，确定文章的基本时态，然后从语法，词汇，固定搭配，句式结构等方
面详细分析短文内容，找出文中的错误并加以修改．