Question

16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
      3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分．
After the college entrance examination，most students will face a seriously question：Should they choose a good major and a good university first？Some students preferred to consider majors first so that they can learn which they are interested in．This will make it possible for them to take their most favorite job in the future．Therefore，those who think differently believe that the learning environment is important and that graduates from a leading university is more likely to find good jobs．
In my opinion，the best choice is good major at a good university．If we cannot obtain all，the first thing to consider is a good major，because wherever they study，we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best．

Answer 1

分析 本文讲述了作者对上大学时该选专业和学校 的看法．高考之后大多数同学都将面临一个问题--要先选一个好的专业，还是先选一个
好的学校呢？有的同学认为选对专业很重要，这样他们将来可以从事他们喜欢的工作；有的同学认为学习环境很重要，要选择有名的大学．
但是作者认为最好的选择就是在一个好大学里面学习自己喜欢的专业．

解答 After the college entrance examination，most students will face a seriouslyquestion：Should they choose a good major anda good university
                                                                                                serious                                                                    or
first？Some students preferredto consider majors first so that they can learn which they are interested in．This will make it possible for them to 
                                prefer                                                                        what
take their  most favorite job in the future．Therefore，those who think differently believe that the learning environment is important and that
            去掉most                                       However                                                                                               
graduates from a leading university is more likely to find good jobs．
                                                  are
In my opinion，the best choice is∧good major at a good university．If we cannot obtain all，the first thing to consider is a good major，because
                                                 a                                                                               both
wherever theystudy，we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best．
              we
1．seriously 改为 serious；考查词性，这里修饰的是question，名词，所以要用形容词．
2．and 改为 or；考查连词，这里用 or 表示选择．
3．preferred 改为 prefer；考查时态，本文讲述的是一个客观现象，要用一般现在时．
4．which 改为 what；考查关系词的用法，which在从句中不作成分，what可以做从句的某一成分，从句中介词in缺少宾语，所以用what作in的宾语．
5．去掉 most；考查最高级，favorite本身意为"最喜欢的"，再加most意思重复．
6．Therefore 改为 However；考查连词的用法，therefore意为"因此"表结果，however意为"然而"表转折，根据上下文意思这里应该是转折关系，故用However．
7．is 改为 are；考查系动词，这里句子的主语是those，"who think differently…from a leading university"是定语从句，所以系动词用are．
8．good 前面加 a；考查冠词，major是可数名词，意为"专业"，加a表示一个．
9．all 改为 both；考查both和all的区别，作为"都"来讲，both指"两者都"，all指三者或三者以上．
10．they 改为 we；考查人称代词，这里应与句子的主语we保持一致．

点评 阅读短文，了解大意，确定基本时态；运用所掌握的基本知识多方面分析每个句子以及句子间的结构关系，找出文中错误加以修改．