Question

【题目】你经常与父母交流吗？调查显示大部分中学生与父母交流正常，但也有少数中学生不能与父母进行有效沟通。某英文杂志就此问题向中学生征稿。请你根据以下要求写一篇100-120个词的英文稿件：

1．简述调查的结果；

2．阐述与父母交流的重要性；

3．说说你已有的做法或接下来的打算。

注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）。

A recent survey shows

Answer 1

【答案】

A recent survey shows most students often communicate with their parents, but there are still some who think it embarrassing to share their ideas with them.

Actually everyone should attach importance to family communication. It can strengthen the bond of the whole family and bridge the gap between children and parents. Besides, sharing your personal problems and emotions will greatly help reduce the pressure on you and build up your confidence.

As for my family, we have a special dinner together every Saturday evening, over which everyone present takes turns to share one problem while the others try to suggest solutions. In this way the whole family can enjoy every single bit of life. I think my family will stick to the tradition forever.

【解析】

试题分析：考查了半开放性作文，本文作者只是提出了一个话题：与父母交流。只给出了一小部分的文字提示，大部分的要点需要考生自己梳理，可以从与父母交流的重要性以及以后自己打算怎么做这几方面入手写作。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。

【亮点说明】文中使用合适的连接词把各要点联系成文，如besides, as for, while等；也使用了一些高级的词汇词组如reduce the pressure on, build up, embarrass等以提升文章的档次分。本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如sharing your personal problems and emotions will…运用动名词作主语；over which everyone present takes turns to…运用了定语从句。