Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today I'd like to tell you something that I experience in the City Park. In the afternoon of last Sunday, my friend and I were taking a walk along a river in the City Park, when suddenly we heard a boy call for help in the river. We jumped into the river or pulled the boy out. Then we made him to breathe using the mouth－to－mouth way.Before the boy came to himself, we sent her to hospital at once and telephoned his parents.The boy was saved. His parents were very thankful us and the doctors thought high of our first aid. We realized that knowing first aid is very help and important because it can help you to save lives.

Answer 1

1.experience改成experienced

2.In---On

3.call--- calling

4.or--- and

5.去掉him后面的 to

6.Before--- After

7.her---him

8.thankful后面加to

9.high--- highly

10.help--- helpful

【解析】

1.1】此处讲的是上星期天上午的事，所以用一般过去时态，故把experience改成experienced。

2.2】在某一天的上午、下午、晚上用介词On ，故把In改成On。

3.3】突然听到一个男孩在河边求救，hear sb. doing 听见某人正在做某事，故把call改成 calling。

4.4】此处表示递进关系，“我们跳进河里把他拉出来”。故把or改成and。

5.5】make sb.do sth.suoyi1去掉him后面的 to.

6.6】根据句意“男孩苏醒以后，我们立刻把他送到医院”。故把Before改成After。

7.7】因为前面提到是一个男孩，所以把her改成him。

8.8】固定搭配be thankful to sb.对某人感谢，故在thankful后面加to。

9.9】固定搭配think highly of 高度评价，副词修饰动词，故把high改成highly。

10.10】be动词后面用形容词作表语，故把help改成helpful。

11.1】experience改成experienced

12.2】In---On

13.3】call--- calling

14.4】or--- and

15.5】去掉him后面的 to

16.6】Before--- After

17.7】her---him

18.8】thankful后面加to

19.9】high--- highly

20.10】help--- helpful

考点：考查短文改错。