Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An Road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And yesterday something went wrongly. Guess what! It made a noise when turning on. At first it was low but gradually they became louder and louder. What’s worst，it even stopped working. We all felt disappointing. I am writing to ask for help. Would you please find someone to repair it? I would be at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here.

Answer 1

【答案】1. buy 改为 bought

2. shape 前加 the

3. And 改为 But

4. wrongly 改为 wrong

55. turning 改为 turned

6. they改为 it

57. worst改为worse

8. disappointing 改为 disappointed

59 .would改为will

10.删掉to

【解析】１.根据时间状语Last year，故用一般过去时，所以buy改为bought。

２.表示特指，用定冠词the。故在shape 前加 the。

３.表示转折，故And改为 But。

４.go wrong是固定用法，意思是（机器等）发生故障。

５.turn和逻辑主语It之间是被动关系，故用过去分词作时间状语。

６.起初它的声音是低的，但渐渐地它变得声音越来越大。故把they改为 it。

７.to make matters worse是固定用法，意思是更糟糕的是，更严重的是。

８.主语We是人，所以disappointing改为disappointed。

９.表示这周末我将在家，故用一般将来时，所以would改为will。

１０.来这里，直接说come here，所以 删掉to 。