题目内容
【题目】我校的外教Smith非常喜欢中国绘画。请你根据以下信息,给Tom写信,告诉他近期将要举办的一个画展,并建议他去参观。
时间:12月10日到25日 ]
地点:八大山人美术馆
地址:南昌市青云谱路259号
内容:八大山人100多幅绘画作品
画家简介:中国17世纪伟大艺术家,擅长绘画,书法,尤其在山水画方面卓有成就。其作品个性鲜明,并对后世画家有深远影响。
注意:1.词数不少于100。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
4. 参考词汇: 山水画 :landscape painting;书法:calligraphy
Dear Smith,
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【答案】
Dear Smith,
I know you are keen on traditional Chinese painting, consequently I’m glad to inform you of the good news that an art exhibition will be held from December 10th to December 25th in Badashanren Gallery, where more than 100 hundred paintings of Badashanren will be on show.
Located at 259 Qinyunpu Road, Badashanren Gallery is the perfect place to appreciate the works of Badashanren, a great artist of Nachang in the 17th century. Not only did he make great achievements in painting, especially landscape painting, but his calligraphy was also well-known at his time. His works are full of his own personality and had deep and far-reaching influence on later painters including Qi Baishi. I promise you will fall in love with his works and achieve a lot once you pay a visit to the show.
Best wishes!
Yours,
【解析】这是一篇通知类的书信写作。写作目的是为了告知他人有画展展出,提醒他关注此事。写作提示给出的内容比较散,写作时要注意将这些提示信息都说明清楚,并适当增加细节,以保证文章的连贯性。范文的亮点突出,采用了三段分段描述,详略得当。第一段开门见山,交代出了中国绘画展的展览时间和展览的内容。为了避免因主语重复而造成的句子冗长,第一段用到了一个定语从句。“an art exhibition。”作为整个句子的先行词,where是关系副词,后面说到在这个画展上有八大山人的100幅绘画展出。第二段开头“Located at 259 Qinyunpu Road”这是一个独立主格结构,因为主语Badashanren Gallery与Locate之间是被动关系,故用过去分词形式。第二句话中用到了一个高级词组“Not only did he make great achievements in painting, especially landscape painting, but his calligraphy was also well-known at his time.”not only……but also……“不仅……而且……”他不仅在绘画上有很大的成就,尤其擅长山水画,而且他的书法在那个时候也是很有名的。当两个信息是出于递进的层次时,可以用到这个词组。它能较为精炼的概括出提示所给出的大致信息,还能使信息与信息之间搭起桥梁,是整个文章通顺、流畅。最后一段说出自己的祝愿,也是写此次书信的目的“I promise you will fall in love with his works and achieve a lot once you pay a visit to the show.”我保证你看完这个画展之后一定会爱上他的作品和佩服他的成就。这也就给这个书信做了一个结尾,既简练又使整篇书信有头有尾。