题目内容
【题目】书面表达
一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1. 家庭; 2. 工作; 3.业余生活。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
【答案】
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. As is often the case, everyone’s life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-six years old by then. I may have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer, which is my dream job. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will make every effort in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games with my friend. On my holidays, I will travel around the world with my family. Last but not least, my life will be much richer and more colorful if I stick to my dream and struggle for it now!
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇记叙文,主题是“十年后的我”。在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手,因为提示信息较少,所以要充分发挥想象,增加适当的细节以使行文连贯,充实内容。比如可以联想到的内容有健身,度假,聚会等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词,插入语以使文章层次分明,使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次,如定语从句,宾语从句和状语从句等。此外,因为是畅想未来,所以要用一般将来时
【亮点说明】本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来的畅想,然后从生活,工作,家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语,避免了文章句式的单一。此外,还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点
【题目】Is there anything more important than health? I don’t think so. “【1】” wise people say.
If you have a headache, toothache, backache, or bad pain in the stomach, if you complain of a bad cough, or if you suffer from high or low blood pressure, I think you go to the doctor.
The doctor will examine your throat, test your blood pressure, take your temperature, sound your heart and lungs, check your teeth or have your chest X-rayed.【2】The only thing you have to do is follow his advice.
【3】An old gentleman came to see the doctor. The man was very ill. He told the doctor about his weakness, memory loss and serious problems with his heart and lungs. The doctor examined him and said there was no medicine for his disease. He told his patient to go to a quiet place for a month and have a good rest.【4】In other words, the doctor advised him to follow the rule:” Eat at pleasure, drink at pleasure and enjoy life as it is.” The doctor also said that if the man wanted to be well again, he shouldn’t smoke more than one cigarette a day.
A month later the gentleman came into the doctor’s office.【5】He thanked the doctor and said that he had never felt a healthier man.
“But you know, doctor” he said,” it’s not easy to begin smoking at my age.”
A.He also advised him to eat a lot of meat, drink two glasses of red wine every day and take long walks. |
B.You can’t be good at your studies or work well when you are ill. |
C.After that he will advise some treatment or some medicine. |
D.Health is the greatest wealth. |
E. He looked cheerful and happy.
F. He was more worried about his illness.
G. Speaking about doctor’s advice, I can’t help telling you a funny story