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16.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处,每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua,a 18-year-old student from Hongxing High School.I've been learned that there is a chance to study in your university.I'm writing to apply to the admission and my qualifications are as following.
To begin with,I'm interest in English,so I think I'm suitable to learn languages,especial in language universities like yours.What's more,in every subjects my academic performance is excellent,which proved I can make it whatever I do in learning.Last but not least,I intend to choose English as my major and devote myself to research this language.
I would appreciate if you could give me the chance.I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 这是一封申请信.李华了解到有机会去这个学校学习,觉得自己符合入学品质.他的英语成绩很好,适合语言学校的学习,此外他的学习成绩很优秀,证明可以做好任何想要做的事,最重要的是他的主修科目是英语.
解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua,a 18-year-old student from Hongxing High School.I've been learned that there is a chance to study in your university.I'm writing to apply to the admission and my qualifications are as following.
To begin with,I'm interest in English,so I think I'm suitable to learn languages,especial in language universities like yours.What's more,in every subjects my academic performance is excellent,which proved I can make it whatever I do in learning.Last but not least,I intend to choose English as my major and devote myself to research this language.
I would appreciate∧if you could give me the chance.I'm looking forward to your early reply.
解析:
1.a改为an.考查冠词. 18-year-old以元音【e】开头,所以用an修饰.
2.去掉been.考查完成时态的主动和被动形式.主语I 和谓语动词 learn之间是主动关系,表示"我已经知道",所以谓语动词用have learned,因此去掉been.
3.to改为for.考查介词.修饰名词the admission,用apply for sth表示"申请",是固定短语.
4.following改为follows.考查固定短语.表示"如下"用as follows,这里的follow是非人称动词,只用follows.
5.interest改为interested.考查派生词.做I'm的表语,用形容词interested,表示"感兴趣的".
6.especial改为especially.考查副词的用法.修饰介词短语 in language universities like yours用副词especially.
7.subjects改为subject.考查名词.根据修饰词 every可知用可数名词subject的单数subject.
8.proved改为proves.考查谓语动词的时态.和本文的时态一致,根据主语which代指主句表示的这件事,谓语动词用第三人称单数.
9.research改为researching.考查非谓语动词. devote myself to用动名词researching做宾语,表示"专心于".
10.在appreciate后加it.考查it的用法.appreciate用it做形式宾语,代指 if you could give me the chance.
点评 考查短文改错.
做短文改错时要注意一下几点:1.快速阅读,整体把握短文大意.2.重视语境以及上下文的关系.3.充分运用基础语言知识找出错误所在.
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