Question

2．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter决定来中国学习中国文化和汉语，请你给他写封回信，告诉他中国的生活．内容包括：
（1）中美生活方式的不同（食物等）；
（2）．学汉语和了解中国文化的最好方式．
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
I'm pleased that you will come to China to study the language and culture．Living in China is a wonderful thing，and I'm sure you'll soon fit in．（高分句型一）The Chinese food is quite different from yours．Besides，most people here like drinking tea instead of coffee．And we use chopsticks while having dinner，which is another difference．（高分句型二）
Chinese people are very friendly and easy-going，so it'll be easy for you to make friends with your classmates and the local people．（高分句型三）Communicating with them is the best way to learn Chinese and Chinese culture．In a word，I'll try my best to help you settle in and make you feel at home．
Looking forward to your coming．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息美国笔友Peter决定来中国学习中国文化和汉语，请你给他写封回信，告诉他中国的生活，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）中美生活方式的不同（食物等）；（2）．学汉语和了解中国文化的最好方式． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：fit in适应；Besides另外；is  different from与…不同；make friends with与…交友；In a word总之
 Living in China is a wonderful thing，and I'm sure you'll soon fit in．（高分句型一）
And we use chopsticks while having dinner，which is another difference．（高分句型二）
 Chinese people are very friendly and easy-going，so it'll be easy for you to make friends with your classmates and the local people．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       I'm pleased that you will come to China to study the language and culture．Living in China is a wonderful thing，and I'm sure you'll soon fit in．（高分句型一）The Chinese food is quite different from yours．Besides，most people here like drinking tea instead of coffee．And we use chopsticks while having dinner，which is another difference．（高分句型二）
      Chinese people are very friendly and easy-going，so it'll be easy for you to make friends with your classmates and the local people．（高分句型三）Communicating with them is the best way to learn Chinese and Chinese culture．In a word，I'll try my best to help you settle in and make you feel at home．
    Looking forward to your coming．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．