Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin) 水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿； 2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；

3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议； 4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。

注意：1. 词数120左右，开学语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。

Hi, Sharon,

This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin._______________________________________________________________.

Li Xia

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Hi, Sharon,

This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am willing to help you with your Mandarin. As a native Chinese speaker, I can speak Chinese clearly and fluently, and my teachers think highly of my spoken Chinese. I have taught some foreigners Mandarin, which makes me have much experience in teaching.

As for speaking Mandarin, it’s better to pay much attention to the pronunciation. Besides, you must take notice of the handwriting. And you also should keep it in mind that comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way to improve your study.

In return I hope you can help me with my spoken English. When I speak English, I often feel a little nervous. Can you give me some advice on how to overcome that?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Li Xia

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲作文。在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题.做到审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次，要抓中心，列要点，然后选择自己熟悉、有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。根据本篇书面表达的要点，可分成三段式写。第一段写写信的目的和胜任的理由；第二段写建议；第三段提出具体需求。

【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构完整。文中作者使用了大量短语，体现了作者丰富的词汇知识，如be willing to do ; think highly of; as for ; pay attention to ; take notice of; keep sth in mind。此外，作者还使用了多种句式，如定语从句：I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communica，宾语从句that comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way to improve your study；状语从句When I speak English等。