Question

14．假如你是李华，上个星期天刚刚过18岁生日是，觉得自己已经是大人了，于是你想写封信给你的父母表达对他们的感谢和告知你今后的打算，信的主要内容如下：
1）对父母的关心和照顾表达感激之情；
2）不断完善自己，争取早日独立；
3）努力学习取得好成绩，进入理想大学；
注意：1）．词数120词左右；2）．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯
Dear Dad and Mum
How are you doing？
I am writing to you about my feelings of being 1 8，my gratitude for you and my future plan．（点明书信主题）Being 18 years old means that I have grown up．Meanwhile I will have more responsibilities and face more difficult-ties，which I will have to learn to solveby myself．【高分句型一】（长大的含义）
Whenever I am thinking of this，I can't help feeling grateful to you．It is you who first give me encouragement when I meet with difficulties．【高分句型二】And more importantly，you are always teaching me to be good to'others，and try to contribute to our society．（对父母的关心和照顾表达感激之情）
I am now a senior three student，who is racing the national college entrance examination．First of all，I ought to try my best to pass the exams．Then I Will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of responsibility．Believe in me，I will make a difference（表决心）
Best regards to you．
Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于十八岁生日感想的作文，根据题目要求可知第一人称，用一般现在时态表示对父母的关心和照顾表达感激之情；用一般将来时表示对于未来的计划．内容包括：一长大的含义；二对父母的关心和照顾表达感激之情；三对于未来的计划．
高分句型：
1．Meanwhile I will have more responsibilities and face more  difficult-ties，which I will have to learn to solve by myself．句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指difficult-ties．
同时我将会有更多的责任，面对更多的困难，这些我必须学会自己解决．
2．It is you who first give me encouragement when I meet with difficulties．句子里It is   who 是强调句式，强调主语you；meet with 表示"遇见"．
是你在我遇到困难的时候给我鼓励．

解答 Dear Mum and Dad，
         How are you doing？I am writing to you about my feelings of being 1 8，my gratitude for you and my future plan．（点明书信主题）Being 18 years old means that I have grown up．Meanwhile I will have more responsibilities and face more  difficult-ties，which I will have to learn to solve by myself．【高分句型一】（长大的含义）
       Whenever I am thinking of this，I can't help feeling grateful to you．It is you who first give me encouragement when I meet with difficulties．【高分句型二】And more importantly，you are always teaching me to be good to'others，and try to contribute to our society．（对父母的关心和照顾表达感激之情）
       I am now a senior three student，who is racing the national college entrance examination．First of all，I ought to try my best to pass the exams．Then I Will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of responsibility．Believe in me，I will make a difference（对于未来的计划）
Best regards to you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
在写作文时，要合理使用高级词汇和句型，增加文章的闪光点，吸引评卷教师的眼球．一篇好的作文不仅要表达通顺、语法准确，而且要不失时机地使用些许高级词汇和句型，一增加文章的"阳春白雪"．例如本文中的强调句式和定语从句等等．