Question

8．与很多国家一样，美国也比较缺乏淡水，尤其是在春夏季节．根据一项调查表明，美国的淡水使用分布情况如下面的图表所示．请根据图表，写一篇调查报告．

注意：1．短文必须包括图表的内容；
2．词数100左右．
参考词汇：consumptive adj．消费的　thermo power热能　livestock n．家畜．
From the graph，we can see that most of the fresh water in the US has been used to irrigate the fields，which accounts for 82 percent of all．While the rest，about 18 percent in all，is used in domestic daily life，industry，livestock，commerce，thermo power and mining，among which domestic use of fresh water has the biggest percentage，accounting for about 7 percent．The use of fresh water in livestock，industry and thermo power is equally 3 percent，taking the third place，and commercial and mining use of fresh water accounts for the least，only 1 per cent．
America has the most developed agriculture and so consumes the biggest share of freshwater．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
From the graph，we can see that most of the fresh water in the US has been used to irrigate the fields，which accounts for 82 percent of all
从图中我们可以看到，在美国最新鲜的水被用来灌溉农田，占了82%．
高分句型二：
The use of fresh water in livestock，industry and thermo power is equally 3 percent，taking the third place，and commercial and mining use of fresh water accounts for the least，only 1 per cent．
淡水家畜的使用，工业和火电平均是3%，以第三的地方，和淡水占最小的商业开采使用，只有1个百分点．

解答 From the graph，we can see that most of the fresh water in the US has been used to irrigate the fields，which accounts for 82 percent of all（高分句型一）．While the rest，about 18 percent in all，is used in domestic daily life，industry，livestock，commerce，thermo power and mining，among which domestic use of fresh water has the biggest percentage，accounting for about 7 percent．The use of fresh water in livestock，industry and thermo power is equally 3 percent，taking the third place，and commercial and mining use of fresh water accounts for the least，only 1 per cent（高分句型二）．
America has the most developed agriculture and so consumes the biggest share of freshwater．

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