Question

15．假设你是李华，是你校英语校报的主编，校报即将修改某些栏目，向读者征求修改意见．请你用英语写一封致读者的信．内容包括：1．修改的目的；2．向读者征求意见；3．投递邮箱 （schoolnewspaper@sina．com）、截止日期；4．意见被采纳者将获赠礼物．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可适当增加细节．以使行文连贯．
A Letter to Our Readers
Dear friends，
Thank you for your constant and sincere support．In order toThank you for your constant and sincere support．In order to make our school newspaper more appealing and helpful，we are going to make some changes about the columns．We are really looking forward to your advice．Which part of our newspaper do you like best？Which column do you think we should cancel？And what other contents would you like us to include？As the old saying goes，"Many hands make light work．"With your constructive suggestions，not only will our newspaper become much closer to students'life，but also it will help you a lot more in English learning．
Please send an email to schoolnewspaper@sina．com before June 29．And those whose suggestions are adopted by us will be given a small but exquisite gift．
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
In order to make our school newspaper more appealing and helpful，we are going to make some changes about the columns
为了使我们的学校的报纸更具吸引力和有用的，我们要对列进行一些修改．
高分句型二：
With your constructive suggestions，not only will our newspaper become much closer to students'life，but also it will help you a lot more in English learning．
你的建设性的建议，不仅将我们的报纸变得更接近生活，但也会帮助你的英语学习更好．

解答 A Letter to Our Readers
Dear friends，
Thank you for your constant and sincere support．In order to make our school newspaper more appealing and helpful，we are going to make some changes about the columns（高分句型一）．We are really looking forward to your advice．Which part of our newspaper do you like best？Which column do you think we should cancel？And what other contents would you like us to include？As the old saying goes，"Many hands make light work．"With your constructive suggestions，not only will our newspaper become much closer to students'life，but also it will help you a lot more in English learning（高分句型二）．
 Please send an email to schoolnewspaper@sina．com before June 29．And those whose suggestions are adopted by us will be given a small but exquisite gift．
Yours truly，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．