题目内容
10.最近的一项研究表明,江苏大约有50%的青少年没有吃早餐的习惯.请根据表格内容用英语写一篇题为"Top Meal of the Day"的短文刊登在21st Century上.原因:1、学习太晚,多睡一会.
2、家长太忙,给钱让孩子自己解决.
3、女孩子保持苗条身材.
结果; 1、课堂上睡觉.
2、注意力下降.
3、成绩不理想.
建议 …
注意:1、词数:120左右.
2、不要逐字翻译,要点可适当发挥.
Top Meal of the Day.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息以"Top Meal of the Day"为话题.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:最近的一项研究表明,北京大约有50%的青少年没有吃早餐的习惯.原因:晚上学习太晚,不吃早饭可多睡一会.家长太忙,给钱让孩子自己解决.女孩子为保持苗条身材常不吃早餐.结果:课堂上整天睡觉.注意力下降.考试成绩不理想.建议:早餐不可少,提供全天所需能量的30%,且有助于创造思维…..2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:concentrate on 专注于;To begin with首先;In addition另外;plays an important part起重要作用
解答 Top Meal of the Day
A recent study shows that nearly 50 percent of the school kids in Jiangsu do not have breakfast.They tend to feel sleepy all day and unable to concentrate on the lessons,so it is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of tests.(高分句型)
There are some reasons for this.To begin with,some students who study late into the night choose to ignore breakfast just to have a few extra minutes in bed.(高分句型)Others,whose parents are too busy to prepare breakfast for them,have to buy it on the way to school with the given money.(高分句型)In addition,a few schoolgirls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast.
In fact,the morning meal plays an important part.It can provide 30 percent of the whole day's energy.For a creative mind and better judgment,school kids should start their day with a regular breakfast.(高分句型)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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