题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校定于本周六晚为外国留学生举办包饺子活动。请给美国留学生Mary写一封电子邮件,邀请她参加。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 活动安排;
3. 期待回复。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Mary,
How is everything with you? I’m writing to invite you to a dumpling-making party, which will be held in our school dining hall this Saturday evening.
Intended to arouse the affection of foreign students with Chinese culture, this party will allow you to learn the history of dumplings and their importance to Chinese people. Besides, you can participate in interesting traditional Chinese games, in which your oral Chinese will be practiced through interactions with your fellow students.
I sincerely hope you can grasp this opportunity to enrich your life in China and deepen your understanding of this country. Looking forward to your presence!
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。要求写一封信。
第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,1. 写信目的;2. 活动安排;3. 期待回复。第二,人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三,时态以一般现在时和一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段,写信目的以及活动的时间和地点。第二段,活动安排。第三段,表达希望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: invite,interactions,dumpling-making party in our school dining hall this Saturday evening,arouse the affection ,Chinese culture,earn the history of dumplings and their importance, participate in, be practiced, grasp this opportunity, enrich your life, deepen your understanding。
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句I’m writing to invite you to a dumpling-making party, which will be held in our school dining hall this Saturday evening. 省略that的宾语从句I sincerely hope you can grasp this opportunity to enrich your life in China and deepen your understanding of this country。
第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Besides,however。
第六步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。