Question

假设你是李华，你在加拿大的笔友Tim得知作为高三的学生，你每天在学校要学习到八点半，他感到惊讶和不解。请你给Tim写封110字左右的回信，介绍情况并谈谈你对此的看法。回信应包括以下要点：

同学们看法不一。

赞成者认为，学校的学习氛围很好，遇到问题还可以马上与同学和老师交流。

反对者认为，学校的学习条件不如家里舒适，学习时容易受到别人的干扰。

说明你的观点和理由。

注意：开头和结尾已经给出，不计入字数。

Dear Tim,

I hope everything is fine with you.

Your letter came to me this morning. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Take good care of yourself and write often.

Yours,

                                          Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tim,

I hope everything is fine with you.

Your letter came to me this morning. It’s really hard for a foreign student to understand this rule that we should stay at school until 8:30 pm every day.

As far as I know, my fellow students react to it differently. Defenders think there’s a good study atmosphere at school, and besides, they’re able to communicate with their classmates and teachers whenever they come across any problem. Critics, however, find it more comfortable to study at home. Even worse, in their opinion, they tend to get disturbed at school.

Personally, I agree that the rule has ensured the efficiency of my study. Anyway, I sometimes can’t concentrate while studying at home.

Take good care of yourself and write often.

Yours，

Li Hua

解析:

文笔要非常流畅，要把握所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明自己对志愿者工作的理解，以此来表达自己的决心。要用词恰当，表现要比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用要正确。