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Dear David,
     Thanks for your e-mail. Now I'd like to tell you something about my summer vacation.
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     What did you do during your summer vacation? Please tell me in your next e-mail.
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Dear David,
     Thanks for your e-mail. Now I'd to tell you something about my summer vacation.
     I finished my homework on time, which I think was the most important. Other than that, I did a lot of
interesting things. As you know, the 2010 FIFA World Cup was held in South Africa. I watched almost all
the football matches with my friends and classmates. How about you? I also took training courses, including
maths, physics and chemistry. I once worked for two weeks in a small restaurant near my home, where I
washed dishes and vegetables. It was really a tiring job, but I think it was worthwhile since I could earn
some money. I think my voluntary work in the nursing home was the most meaningful. I did some cleaning
and read newspapers for the elderly there.
     What did you do during your summer vacation? Please tell me in your next -email. 
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Dear Sir,
     My name is Li Hua, from Guang Ming High School in Beijing, China. I would like to apply for
admission to the English Department of your school.
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     I should be grateful if you can take my application into consideration.
     Looking forward to your early reply.
                                                                                                                   Yours sincerely
                                                                                                                          Li Hua

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