Question

20．假定你是学生会主席李华，邀请交换生Peter参加你校在本月举行的文明校园（civilized campus）创建活动．请根据以下要点，给他写一封电子邮件．
1．活动目的；
2．活动内容（倡导语言美、行为美、环境美）；
3．表示欢迎．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
It is great honor for me to invite you to take part in the activity"Build a Civilized Campus"this month．（高分句型一）
We aim at going hand in hand to set up our civilized campus where beauty and harmony meet．（高分句型二）To achieve the goal，we'll call on the school to communicate with each other in polite words．Meanwhile，we should behave ourselves and obey school rules．As a nice environment is good for us，we'll space no effort to create a pleasant school environment．（高分句型三）All the above is to contribute to the good conduct of teachers and students in our school．
It would be nice if you could join us．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 假定你是学生会主席李华，邀请交换生Peter参加你校在本月举行的文明校园（civilized campus）创建活动．请根据以下要点，给他写一封电子邮件．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：活动目的；活动内容（倡导语言美、行为美、环境美）；表示欢迎． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take part in参加；hand in hand手牵手；call on呼吁； communicate with沟通；Meanwhile同时；contribute to有助于；
It is great honor for me to invite you to take part in the activity"Build a Civilized Campus"this month．（高分句型一）
We aim at going hand in hand to set up our civilized campus where beauty and harmony meet．（高分句型二）
As a nice environment is good for us，we'll space no effort to create a pleasant school environment．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      It is great honor for me to invite you to take part in the activity"Build a Civilized Campus"this month．（高分句型一）
      We aim at going hand in hand to set up our civilized campus where beauty and harmony meet．（高分句型二）To achieve the goal，we'll call on the school to communicate with each other in polite words．Meanwhile，we should behave ourselves and obey school rules．As a nice environment is good for us，we'll space no effort to create a pleasant school environment．（高分句型三）All the above is to contribute to the good conduct of teachers and students in our school．
       It would be nice if you could join us．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．