Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Daniel准备在他们学校组织一个主题为“走进中国(Come Close to China)”的中国文化节，他写信请你帮忙策划一下活动内容并介绍一下有中国特色的元素，以便让他的同学更好地了解中国。请你用英文写封回信。

要求:

1.120 字左右；

2.需包括至少两个中国元素，可适当增减细节。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Daniel,

I'm more than delighted to know that you are launching a Chinese culture festival, with the theme of “Come close to China”，aiming to introduce your peers to a thriving China.

From my perspective, the activities may range from a Chinese calligraphy competition to an exhibition of paper cutting, and martial

arts. Besides, it would be more desirable if students there could be given a chance to appreciate Beijing Opera. With a history of nea

rly 200 years, it's a form of traditional Chinese theatre, which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture.

Yours，

LiHua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Daniel写一封回信，帮他策划一下中国文化节活动内容并介绍一下有中国特色的元素，以便让他的同学更好地了解中国。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

要求：120 字左右；

2.需包括至少两个中国元素，可适当增减细节。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

be delighted to; launch a Chinese culture festival; the theme of; aim to; peer; a thriving China; perspective; range from; calligraphy; an exhibition of; paper cutting; martial arts; desirable; appreciate; With a history of; a form of; be considered as; quintessence

第三步：连词成句

1.I’m more than delighted to know that you are launching a Chinese culture festival, with the theme of “Come close to China”，aiming to introduce your peers to a thriving China.

2.From my perspective, the activities may range from a Chinese calligraphy competition to an exhibition of paper cutting, and martial arts.

3.Besides, it would be more desirable if students there could be given a chance to appreciate Beijing Opera.

4.With a history of nearly 200 years, it's a form of traditional Chinese theatre, which is considered as the quintessence of Chinese culture.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改