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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred Yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after, but he gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

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【解析】

本文是一篇故事。作者讲述了高中时想买自行车，父亲只给一半的钱，自己放学后卖报纸攒够了另一半，如愿以偿买了自行车。

1.考查名词。句意：当我上高中时，许多的朋友有自行车。Most of 后面加名词的复数形式。故friend 改为friends.

2.考查代词。此处指我希望能有一辆自行车。one 指同一类中的不同个,It代指同一内容。故it 改为one.

3.考查定语从句。句意：有一天我看到一辆二手自行车，它只卖100元。which代指a second-hand bicycle，此处是非限制性定语从句，不用that.故that改为which.

4.考查介词。此处指我要求父亲给我买一辆。ask sb for sth，向某人索要某物。故my father后加for.

5.考查人称代词。句意：我必须自己负担另外一半的钱。强调的是我而不是父亲。故He 改为I.

6.考查固定短语。after school放学后，是固定短语。故after the school去掉the.

7.考查形容词。pleasing“令人愉快的”修饰物；修饰人用pleased，意为“高兴的”。故pleasing 改pleased.

8.考查固定搭配。a month later“一个月后”是固定短语。故after改为later.

9. 考查动词时态。整体文章用一般过去时来讲述过去的事，此处也用一般过去时。故gives改gave.

10.考查感叹句。句意：你能想象当我自己骑车去学校时有多么快乐。感叹句的构成是：how +形容词+主语+谓语，故much删掉。