题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Max来信询问你校图书馆的情况。请给他写回信,内容包括:
1.介绍图书馆(位置、占地、功能等);
2.你经常借阅的书籍类型。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Max,
I’m glad to know you are interested in our school library. Some details are as follows.
The library, completed recently, is located behind our teaching building. Covering an area of 2,500 square kilometers, it is a landmark of our school. Apart from reading rooms, there are some lecture halls where we can hold some activities. Also, the students can have access to the computers in the library.
There are all kinds of books for us to choose from. But what interests me most are history books. By reading them, I can learn lots of knowledge about the things happening in the past.
I’m looking forward to your arrival and joining me in experiencing it.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封回信,给你的英国朋友Max介绍你校图书馆的情况。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 介绍图书馆。(introduce the library)
2. 你经常借阅的书籍类型。(types of books that you often borrow)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be interested in; details; is located behind our teaching building; covering an area of; lecture halls; have access to the computers; all kinds of books; what interests me most; learn lots of knowledge; looking forward to your arrival
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m glad to know you are interested in our school library. Some details are as follows.
2. The library, completed recently, is located behind our teaching building.
3. Covering an area of 2,500 square kilometers, it is a landmark of our school.
4. Apart from reading rooms, there are some lecture halls where we can hold some activities.
5. Also, the students can have access to the computers in the library.
6. There are all kinds of books for us to choose from.
7. But what interests me most are history books.
8. By reading them, I can learn lots of knowledge about the things happening in the past.
9. I’m looking forward to your arrival and joining me in experiencing it.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
第五步:润色修改