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【题目】假定你是高一学生李华,将参加21世纪报社的征文比赛,主题是“三年后的我”。请你根据以下提示和你的畅想完成短文。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已经为你写好,不计入总词数。
I often imagine what my life will be like in three years. __________________________________________.
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【答案】I often imagine what my life will be like in three years. I think it must be quite different from now.
By then I will be studying in my dream college. Although I have to spend enough time and energy on studies in order to find a good job after graduation. I’m sure I will not be so busy as now. therefore, I woul like to spare some time to do a lot of after-school activities that I am interested in so that I can enrich my college life and have myself improved. Besides, I can get to know many teachers and classmates. With whom I will make friends and get along well. On holidays, I’ll travel around the world to learn about the world and broaden my horizons.
This will be my life three years, which will be rich and colorful. I am really looking forward to it.
【解析】试题分析:本文是一篇开放式作文,假定你是高一学生李华,将参加21世纪报社的征文比赛,主题是“三年后的我”。 认真阅读提示,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文采用三段式,内容符合要求,结构布局合理,文中使用高级句子。I often imagine what my life will be like in three years.what引导宾语从句;By then I will be studying in my dream college.将来进行时态运用巧妙;Although I have to spend enough time and energy on studies in order to find a good job after graduation. I’m sure I will not be so busy as now. Although引导让步状语从句;I woul like to spare some time to do a lot of after-school activities that I am interested in so that I can enrich my college life and have myself improved.定语从句和so that的目的状语从句完美结合;This will be my life three years, which will be rich and colorful.which引导非限制性定语从句。