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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺单词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was a sunny day today and I went to Xishan Park for a spring outing. The moment I entered in the park, a variety of beautiful flowers and green trees come into sight. Attracted by the beauty, I couldn't stop taking photo. As I wandered along the path, enjoy the beautiful view, I noticed something unpleasantly. Two schoolgirls jumped the fence to pick flowers. Obviously they didn't realize that their behavior had done great damage on the beauty of the park. Without delay, I went up and stopped them politely. Quite embarrassing, the two girls came out immediately. Then we took pictures outside the fence. Seeing that, I smiled and something looked nicer in my eyes.

Answer 1

【答案】①entered后面的in去掉 ； ②come→ came ； ③photo→ photos ； ④enjoy→ enjoying ； ⑤unpleasantly→ unpleasant ；⑥jumped后加over； ⑦on→ to ； ⑧embarrassing→ embarrassed ；⑨we→ they ； ⑩something→ everything
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，作者讲述了一次春游的经历。
①考查介词。 enter是及物动词，本身含有“in/into”的意思，故去掉in。
②考查时态。根据上下文的联系可知，句子应该用一般过去时态，故把come改为came。
③考查名词。句意：我不能停止拍照。此处名词用复数形式，故把photo改为photos。
④考查非谓语动词。 此处enjoy表示伴随状态，伴随谓语动作，故把enjoy改为enjoying。
⑤考查形容词。 句意：我注意到一些不愉快的事情。形容词修饰不定代词，故把unpleasantly改为unpleasant。
⑥考查介词。 这里表示“跳过围墙”，故在jumped后加over。
⑦考查固定短语。 do damage to sb./sth.固定短语“对.....造成损害”，故把on改为to。
⑧考查形容词。 句意：相当尴尬，两个女孩走出来。embarrassed用来修饰人，embarrassing修饰事物，这里很明显是修饰人，故要把embarrassing改为embarrassed。
⑨考查代词。 句意：然后他们在围墙外面拍照。根据下文作者“看到这种情景，笑了”可知是她们两个拍照。故把we → they。
⑩考查代词。 句意：看到这个，我笑了，一切在我眼中看上去更好了。故把something改为everything。