Question

8．学校英文杂志New Babel向高中学生征文，主题是"My Life in the Senior Year"，内容包括：
1．高中生活概况；
2．问题或困难；
3．解决方法或建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
My Life in the Senior Year
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇以高中生活为话题的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一高中生活概况；二存在的困难；三自己的建议．
高分句型：
1．With a big dream to fulfill，I enjoy my school life，working diligently and passionately．句子里With a big dream to fulfill是with的复合结构，to fulfill表示"将要实现的"；working diligently and passionately是伴随状语，和主语I 之间是主动关系．
因为有一个梦想要实现，我喜欢我的学校生活，勤奋和热情地学习着．
2．My parents also push me a lot，which contributes to some unpleasant conflicts or misunderstanding between us．句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句；contributes to 表示"导致"．
父母总是督促我学习，这导致我们自己有了不令人愉快的冲突和误解．

解答 A possible version：
As a senior two student，my life is extremely full and occupied．With a big dream to fulfill，I enjoy my school life，working diligently and passionately．【高分句型一】（高中生活概况）
However，I can't deny that I am burdened with so much that I feel exhausted sometimes both physically and mentally．Too much homework takes away our time for enough exercise and the development of personal hobbies．My parents also push me a lot，which contributes to some unpleasant conflicts or misunderstanding between us．【高分句型二】（存在的困难）
How I wish our society would pay more attention to our health and all-round development!Leaving us less but more efficient homework will help make our study life in senior three more colorful!（自己的建议）

点评 考查提纲类作文．写作文时，要往英语书上靠拢，多找书上的单词，这样能证明你是这个年级的学生．同时不要混淆英语和汉语的写法规则．这需要多看些英语书籍，来丰富自己对英语的认识．