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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking．I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

Answer 1

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【解析】文章介绍作者的教练退休了，在退休聚会上作者送给教练自己亲手烘焙的饼干。教练非常高兴。

考查介词。句意：我的足球教练上个星期退休了。在last week，next week，this week之前不需要任何介词。last week前面不加介词，去掉in。

考查不定代词。句意：我想在他退休聚会上为他做些特别的事情。“一些事情”，肯定句中用something。故将anything改为something。

考查形容词最高级。句意：我妈妈做的是世界上最好的饼干。用最高级，better改成best。

考查动词时态。句意：所以我决定向她求助。这篇文章使用一般过去时，故将decide改成decided。

考查名词复数。句意：妈妈教我一些基本的烘焙的步骤。step 是可数名词，用复数steps。

考查形容词辨析。句意：我认为这些饼干很好。be动词后接形容词good, well作形容词时，意为“健康的”。做表语用形容词，well改成good。

考查连词。句意：我唯一的错误是在我将它们打包的时候将它们掉在地上。本处意为“当时候”。故将after改成when/while。

考查冠词。。句意：这里是特指第一段提到的退休聚会。特指“那次晚会”，应用定冠词the。

考查动词不定式。句意：我可能明年要再退休一次，只是想得到更多这样的饼干。用不定式做目的状语。just后加to。

非谓语动词。句意：我最喜欢的照片是我和我的教练在聚会上开心地享受饼干。根据介词of，应用动名词enjoying，my coach and me是enjoying的逻辑主语。of后面接动名词，故将 enjoy改为enjoying。