Question

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，刚参加完“美国高校一周游”的夏令营活动，在离开之前，你想给新结交的美国朋友Monica写一封感谢信，内容应包括以下要点：
1.表示感谢；
2.描述参加比次夏令营的收获；
3.邀请她参加明年在中国的夏令营。
注意：1.可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数：120-150.
2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Monica,
                                                                              
 
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your company while I was on this summer camp, which was an unforgettable experience for me and I also benefited a lot from it.
Through visiting American universities, I got a good knowledge of American universities-tourist attractions in some way, which broadened my horizon and introduced me to more about American culture. Besides, during the summer camp, I made some American friends, just like you, who gave me lots of assistance. Moreover, in an environment exposed to English language, my English listening and speaking skills got improved greatly.
Would you like to join the summer camp in China next summer? I'll be you best guide and you can experience traditional Chinese culture, and enjoy tasty Chinese food, etc.
I'm looking forward to your coming.

解析试题分析：本文属于半开放性的作文，只是给出了概要，大部分的内容要求考生自己梳理。在文章中可以选择在此次夏令营中的一些典型事例来表明对方对你的帮助能促进你的进步和成长。以此表示感谢。描述本次夏令营的收获的时候，可以从语言，能力和跨文化意识等方面着手。最后邀请对方来中国参观。
考点：考查半开放性作文的写作
点评：本题的难度在于要点的梳理，要描述本次夏令营中的典型事例来说明本次夏令营对你的帮助，在写作的时候需要选用一些高级的词汇和句型来提高文章的文采，运用连接词来让文章成为一个整体，更流畅。